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Strong smells-curry, maybe. Or something heavy on the cumin. Smells like male sweat. Nasty. In the distance a light tinkling of bells and coming into view, the delicate ankle the bells wound around. A light gossamer of pale blue and then the swaying begins…
Feeling light-headed and breathless, he watches her step onto the dais…
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(This is for you, Gabi!!!!)
21 comments:
Great 55!
I just can't get enough of you e-cat!
Let the dancing begin...
Cool 55! I didn't realize I could play with your cat until someone commented on it. Very cool!
Curry and sweat. Actually I like them both. Maybe my nose is impaired.
wow. great 55. engaging all our senses...
my 55 is up!
That is a truly inspired 55. Thanks for showing how it's done...
Congrats, you really put us into the moment, engaging emotions and the senses.
My 55 is Love returned
I can just see Gabi stepping onto the dais. Fun 55, Annie.
I can see, smell, hear this! Wow
Great word-picture!
Aloha, Friend
Comfort Spiral
Ok that was very cool. (male sweat?) ;)
PG's daughter's Big Dog Lucky--came bursting into my computer space, looking for the CAT. Beautiful! And I enjoy making him purr!
Now--what was it you wrote? OH! A "55". How nice--grin!
Annie...
Your Cat?
I thought it was about a belly dancer
You had me fooled..Excellent 55.
Thank you so much for visiting and playing today...You Rock!
Have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
I went to g-daddy's, but still have no idea what this 55 flash is.
I still have 3 hours on this end of the world till my day is over, an extra hour when i go Alaska time, anyway enlight me, because i do like your piece! and would like to partake.
G-daddy...it's the cat on the face of my blog...the virtual cat. He moves and paws at your cursor when you run it by him...
Steve's a dork.
My 55 is NOT about a cat. LMAO!!
Thanks everyone. This 55 was a second draft. The first one was about a knife and a pillowcase and a rooster...LOL
Thanks for stopping by!!
This is DORK checking in--Meeeowwww!
was she visiting a Morrocon belle dance restaurant?
I really like your cat. COOL.
blogspot is addictive.
I have both. lol
I really like your cat. COOL.
blogspot is addictive.
I have both. lol
Like G-man I thought it was about a belly dancer too - you got me!
OMG...curry and sweat LOL. Wonderful 55 my friend. Well done :) Have a great weekend :)
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