What in the world are you doing? Stop it. Stop it right now!
Her words meant nothing, she could see. They continued to circle and closing in, she could feel the heat of their blood, see the gleam in their eyes.
There was no escaping the inevitable. It would be a fight to the finish.
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Here it is...now, go to G-Man and tell him about yours!!!
17 comments:
...fight to the finish. Excellent way to leave a person hanging!
Good one!
It would be scary to be the victim...waiting as the hunters encircled me. Creative 55! Thanks Akannie :)
Awesome 55!
Awesomwe 55 Very nice blog. I love the cat. I played for 15 minutes lol I will be back for more!
Suspense!
Aloha, Friend
Comfort Spiral
nice 55. not sure exactly what is closing in...but i am scared. lol.
my 55 is up!
Jesus, You're scarin' me!
Annie...
This was a PERFECT 55!
Suspensful, and you left us hanging! I love that aspect. It doesn't say anywhere that that you need a final scene.
I really liked this story, You Rock Baby!
Have a Kick Ass Week-End...G-Daddy
This was a chilling 55! Kind of reminded me of the feel I got reading The Lottery by Shirley Jackson.
Thanks for visiting mine!
Better to live with blood on your hands than to die at the hands of another.
Scary 55! Thanks for visiting my site! I love your cats, I should take more photos for my blog.
Hope your knee is ok, You sound like the surgery is healing well with very little pain. Keep it elevated!
I like it!
That is one of the best fifty-fives I've read.
Nice work.
If I could cut myself down to fifty-five words, I'd be posting one, too. I can hardly do that in a comment!
It reminds me of how my husband always describes songs by Pink Floyd: "Not a lot of notes, just the right ones."
Congratulations on your award.
I'll be back!
All right, fight! Fight to the finish. Be strong. Have courage. Stay focused. Fight!
Will there be a part two? Nicley done.
fun isn't it when you leave hanging as you did means you have all the control Yes I liked it and think it was clever to stop at the point you did . I look forward to reading you again.
Sweetest Of Sorrows
Thanks for your comments ahead of time I appreciate them .
Oh, dear.
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